It was ok....
There is much to be improved, especially the subtitles. There was too much use of new times roman and the subtitle background was terrible. The sprites could have been blured slightly in photoshop to make them blend in alittle better with the background.
The effects on the otherhand where fantastic. If you make your own personalised font and fixed the subtitles you will be well on your way to making a better movie.
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